Hi, Oliviya!
Thank you for the new photo.

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You’ve followed my recommendations perfectly and got a much better quality shot: the ISO is at a minimum, the aperture is not too narrow. No issues around the exposure – it is correct.

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The only thing is, try to press down more smoothly on the shutter. It’s just that the shutter speed is not that quick, only 1/30, and you can see your hand has jerked slightly. As a result, the photo has come out a little blurred. And of course this is best avoided. You could get away with opening the aperture to 10, and increasing the shutter speed to 1/60. The exposure will then be the same, but it will be easier to take the picture.

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I will accept this one!