Hello, Oliviya!
Thank you for the new photo!

Оценка работы

This one looks a lot better, the photograph is bright and dynamic, with an interesting subject matter and good technical quality.

You have used manual mode and chosen all the correct settings. You have managed to freeze the spray of the water in mid-air and capture a great emotional point in the model’s movement. The wide aperture provides a short depth of field, giving a blurred background that does not distract from the main subject.

The shot is well composed, leaving plenty of space for action to develop within the frame.

Most importantly, the lighting is now much better, the model is evenly lit all over. Excellent!

Замечания и рекомендации

It could have been a little more tightly framed, for example: https://gyazo.com/9cd2b85f96c49d1ba18c474d3a48c1ee.

This way, we would lose a small part of the top of the spray, but we’d also be able to get rid of the distracting, brightly-colored details to the left and right, and reduce the section of bright sky, which takes away the viewer’s attention.

It’s possible to crop an image even after taking the shot in a graphics editor, for example in Adobe Photoshop with CropTool.

Either way you have an interesting shot here, which looks perfect even as it is.

Выводы

I will accept this photo!