I was actually conflicted whether to use this photograph for this assignment or for the previous one where we had to take a picture of bright object against a white background. But considering it was food on a plate, I decided to go with this assignment. Taking a picture against a white background definitely felt a lot trickier. I hope the shot came out as well as you'd like it to be!
Hello Olivia,
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Nice shot! I like the soft patterns of light and shade. This brings across the depth very well.
And you have done a great job with the technical settings. The chosen aperture value gives a soft blur and allows you to add a particular emphasis. There is no digital noise, because the ISO value is minimal.
I like your choice of a square. The round plate, inserted into the square frame of the shot, looks really effective.
The colour transfer is authentic, spot on.
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Remember that an odd number of objects within the shot looks more striking, more interesting. You could take one whole piece of fruit and two halves. The halves could be placed next to each other. Try that next time.
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I’ll accept this one!